User blog comment:Awesomeperson110/Battle of the Clubs (2)/@comment-24367038-20140409221856


 * 1) It's "Cult of Potato Brethren." Not "Colt." A colt is a baby horse. XD
 * 2) That scene with the parfait happened word-for-word in the first chapter. So did Over the Rhine, I think. Hehe, talking about wibbly-wobbly....
 * 3) I LOVE how you made me so agile. IRL, I can't touch my toes or do one push-up. >-<
 * 4) Just from a critical standpoint, Lovie's exposition seems a bit forced to me. Like, just not natural enough, if you get what I'm saying....

But it really is an awesome story! Can't wait to see how this turns out!!!! ^U^