Thread:Bo Bo Joe/@comment-7229208-20140118140721/@comment-10734109-20140122220801

Hmm... Let me think

Well, one easy fix that can be done is to center the pupils in the irises (aka, the colored part of the eyes). Your spacing on the face (eye from eye, nose from eyes, nose from mouth, etc.) seems to be good. With your first manga drawing that you did, you could always make the face more angular. That seems to be fairly common in manga, I believe. The proportions are not at all far from the newer Disney style, though some alterations that I can't really think of set them apart. Your personal art style seems to be a combination of both. Some minor things that could be changed are the neck length (it could be a tiny bit shorter) and the arc height of the eyebrows. It's always good to have some sort of reference photo on hand if you can, just so that you can see how things are placed on the face in real life :) Here's a picture of Emma Watson that could work fairly well. The more photos to look off of, the better! Just look up a few different people, or something like "girl/boy with green eyes" or something of the sort. http://pagetopremiere.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/06/emma.jpg Hope this helped somewhat :) I can't really give criticism on PPG's, but I would suggest not drawing them too often ^_^ It's good to branch off into different styles, but you should also embrace your own style as much as you can, and try to focus on improving that. If you would like some extra styles to try your hand at, you can ask me! :D So far it looks like you're off to a good start! I hope to see more from you in the future! I'm excited to see what you decide on drawing next :D