Talk:How to Get Your Art Approved/@comment-10444598-20130608211323

Hey Guys! I have a huge question! I think my writing sounds like something you would read in books! Here's something i made up in the car! 

''                                I stepped up the rusty, old ladder. As I sat down on the dusty, jagged brick roof, I glanced up at the shimmering, stirling stars. I thought about how times were rough before. How my parents divorced and such. But,when I glanced at my gold locket and saw my name in diamond, and opened it up to see my parents's pictures, I realized I was already home.''

Well, actually I thought abput half of it in the car. The rest i made AT THE SPOT. That's why i think my writing is THAT GOOD! Comment if it does sound like it belongs in a book and that maybe a should be an author when i grow up! (After i wrote this, i actually want to be an author when i grow up!)