User blog comment:RedMonkey101 Studios/F.G.U: Dimension Crossing's Amazing, Huh?/@comment-24367038-20140513114651

K, in this last section...

"I am neither jelly nor annoyed," RED said to them (you s. ACE'S CRUSH. YOU CLEVER tched to first person for a sec there)

Also, "Her tripping caused the girls(who were trying to catch her) fell on top of her..."...if you take out the parenthetical, it makes no sense....it should be "to fall"

Grammar aside, this is great. AND I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE WITH THE HOODED FIGURE AND  ACE'S CRUSH. YOU SLY DOG. XD