User blog:RedMonkey101 Studios/So this one book of mine...

OK so I drew this REALLLY cool picture, it goes with mah book right(AP YOU KNOW WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT HUH? ^3^) So basically it's my main character Savannah Mason falling off a burning building in a wedding dress... You'll get why I drew it if you read the book...

Anywho I thought I'd show you the picture and put the scene in it too, to show you what I came up for it and the drawing :3... But uh first a warning, this may scare people under the age of 10 or higher, it depends on your fear factor... REMEMBER THIS IS FICTION, None of this really happened so there's no need to be scaried... anyways lets begin..

Ok this is mid chapter:
The buildings started to collapse, turning into ash beneath themselves. I knew this wasn't going to pass. I had to die, there's no other way.

“Don't you see Savannah?” Hunter asked, he roared over the screams that fell below us. “This is all according to the plan!” He started to laugh, a hysterical laughter that made to break down to my knees. He was absolutely crazy!

“Your crazy, Hunter!” I yell, “This is not what should happen to this world!” I knew it wouldn't make a difference whether or not I said this, he still would burn this world.

“Who cares what happens to this is world, let it all burn!” Hunter exclaims. The roaring fire staring climbing up the building's side. There was nothing I could do, what was there to do? Unless...

Before thinking another thought, I look towards the side of the building where I saw that patch of grassed area, earlier before. Then I start to run, run towards the edge of the burning building and lunged myself off, throwing my entire body weight off the side of the building, having the white wedding dress I wore falling after me. I shifted as I fell and saw Hunter's expression and his screams, but it was too late.

Everything slowed, my scarlet hair flung pass me as I watch the darken sky move farther and farther away. The dress flung as my hair did, it swished as the wind crested me in it's arms. The only thing I could think of to do was cry, for this was the last time I will ever do, I was falling to my death.



Pain struck my body as I hit the grass beneath me. I could feel the warm liquid stream out of me, everywhere. I touch my mouth, as I pull back my hand I see red blotches stretched across it. I was chocking on blood now, my vision blurred. I was dying. As I wait nothing happens, a horrible pain rushes through my body and all I could think is; Waiting for death is stupid!

After a few moments rush of pain finally past over me. How long have I been lying here anyway? I thought next. Feels like hours. At least I don’t feel the pain any longer. That was the worst part. I have never felt pain like that and wishing for death was not something I thought I would ever beg for, but that's exactly what I wanted right now. In the bright glow of the sun, Savannah’s body was stretched out on the grassy area near the burning building, the broken glass and blood showered her in pain again as she let the setting sun take with it, her life. This would be the last day she would ever see. She didn't dare to close her eyes, she only wanted to feel the day’s heat slip away, Savannah thought of her mom and dad. How are they going to feel about my death she thought? Sad? Mad? Glad? Savannah chuckled to herself. I’m dying but I still rhyme away. There's no return from this, and tears were now streaming down my face. Why am I crying about death? I thought resting my head against the newly wet grass, now while the warm liquid streamed from the side of my head. Blood, I guessed. I take a breathe in, one of my last breaths. I could hear them coming, the footsteps. Alas, they found me. My mind keeps playing. The shouting came next but were drained out, I no longer could hear. What a shame...

That was my vision, the one I had so very long ago. The one of my death, it was happening now. Before I didn't know where I was or why I had glass shards in my body or who those footsteps belonged to, now I knew.

Mackenzie, Danielle, and the others crowded around me all had the same pale white faces. Danielle sat down next to me, shaking me, her herself was shaking from it all. Not long after they were join by Peter, he looked as if he never step foot into the Guardian's Hospital. Danielle was up on her feet now, tears streaming down her face, as well as my own, as she looked towards Mackenzie who was angry and arguing with Mason, but only Peter looked at me.

Still everyone's voices were blocked out by the sounds of nothingness, but then I heard Peter clearly. “Savannah...” he whispered. Mackenzie, who now had stop her arguing with Mason, was saying something to him but he neither cared or listened. “Savannah,” he repeated, “What have you done.”

I started to chuckle under my breath, “What does it look like?” I asked flatly, death was making it harder to breath.

“It looks like you've done another one of your stupid Savannah Mason plans” he responded.

I take a breath in, chocking on more blood I say; “I've saved the world...” He smiles and I add, “but to sum it up, yes, another one of my stupid plans..” He laughs at this, I try to but only to flinch in the pain. “Peter?” I say, my breaths slowing. “Make them forget, make them forget so that I never existed.” I knew he understood, so I slowly closed my eye lids.

“Hey, stay with us Savior.” I hear him say.

“It's time for me to let go. I don't want to feel the pain any longer, and I don't belong to this world anymore. We all can't be immortal like you.” My eyes were close but I could feel his sad eyes gloss over me. Then as the sun's heat finally went away and the pain is completely gone, I hear Peter whisper something, but I'm too far gone to hear the words. Or anything at all.

So, did you like it? ^3^
Uh hmm... That was mid chapter so not all of it but some, I only did the part where she falls and the aftermath, but COOL HUH?! I mean seriously I did an amazing job on my first side anime picture. Not to brag or anything. Anyways, I would love to know what you guys think. I, uh, hope I didn't scare anyone with the story and if I did I will give you a hug and a potato with a face in return. Welp thanks for taking le time in reading my story, BAI! x3