Talk:Disney Create/@comment-24036403-20131216221005/@comment-12736261-20131216221314

Okay, it kind of seems like you went to fast. You should add more details and more feelings. Describe how they feel, how the wintery wind makes them cold to the bone, that kind of thing. Maybe this was just a short blurb, and if so that is totally fine. And you should call it Christmas in April.