Talk:Disney Create/@comment-11518342-20140308212448

I'm writing a story ;u; what do you guys think so far?

  The computer screen flickered, providing the only light to a dark room. Sighing, Mindy tugged on the ears of her Totoro onesie. She had an agitated look on her face, rolling back and forth in her swivel chair. The door creaked as a groomed white cat slipped through.

"Mr.Fluffy, You shouldn't be here." Mindy whispered while stroking the cat. He responded with a soft meow. It was 5:00 in the morning and her mom would kill her if she found her up this late. Or something even worse, take away her electronics.

In 3 hours she would have to go to a new school, and manage through the whole day. Being homeschooled her whole life didn't help with making friends, nor having an idea how the school would be like. Her mom barged into her room one day and told her she was going to go to school, no objection. Mindy shuffled around a small, folded-up paper in between her fingers, her mom ordered her to unfold the paper at the end of the school day.

She sighed again once more, shoving the paper into the front pocket of her bunny backpack.



I need opinions if you would read the story or not, and what I can do to make it better >u< Thanks!