Talk:Disney Create/@comment-24480187-20141218024833/@comment-25106584-20141220072641

I can't keep my mouth shut any longer.

Par, as short as the story is, it's so moving and covers many interesting concepts that most pieces of literature online lack. It was all executed perfectly. The character's struggles are relatable, and his actions at the end surprised me. It was touching, for most. The title hooks in the reader, and he or she will not be disappointed. You could publish this book and it would be an immediate bestseller! 10/10.