Board Thread:Questions and Answers/@comment-10734109-20140208221559

Okay, so I already posted this on DeviantART, but to get more feedback I'm posting it here as well. Anyway, my dad and I were talking about Frozen at lunch today and how it could have been better if they'd changed a few things, and then we came up with a fairly different plot that they could have used instead of the one that they did which (in our opinion) would have been more interesting and would have made more sense. So, I was wondering if you guys would support me doing a comic sort of thing with the edits and everything. It will still use the same characters and everything (even though, sadly, I may end up having to cut out Olaf due to not knowing how to introduce him). Here's the gist of the exposition:

The beginning will be similar, though Kristoff will probably get noticed by the ice cutters and will sort of be adopted by them. Either that or his dad will have been an ice cutter. Not sure yet. After Anna and Elsa go to the trolls with their parents, their family will decide that it is best if the two are to be kept apart so that Elsa doesn't accidentally introduce her magic to Anna again, and so that they can keep the gates open in the kingdom and not have to worry about rising suspicion. Rather, Elsa will be sent to live with a wizard type person, who will help her to try and control her powers. The family decides that it would be best for them both to have all memories of each other erased for safety, with Anna staying in the castle and Elsa living with the wizard out in the middle of nowhere, as to not disrupt society in the town. Anna was told that she'd had a sister, but that she had died of a severe case of smallpox before Anna would have been able to remember her. Elsa was told by the wizard that her family had died in a travelling accident years ago, and that Elsa had been the only survivor. However, the wizard had renamed her as Chione, meaning "ice queen" for safety so that she would have less of a chance of finding out the truth.

I haven't worked out many plot details yet, and I also don't want to give spoilers. So yeah. Some of the characters' personalities may change (Anna will probably be more intelligent because she will be exposed to the outside world), and Anna will have an arranged marriage to Hans rather than randomly meeting him most likely.

What do you guys think? Does it sound good so far? 