Talk:Pengytess/@comment-10444598-20130611000420/@comment-10444598-20130611002045

Hey PS! Ohmygosh! I just re-read ur comment and it said to make it scary! Ok here are some ideas to make it scary! Ok um after the part everthing went black also type: I knew i started having hallucinations (or how ever you spell it) because I  saw a message in blood saying "I'm watching you!" and another saying "Be gone!" So I started running into the pitch blackness. I bumped into a figure. I looked up and saw it was the ghost that was haunted my dreams when i was little! She had a smirk on her face and started laughing evily. I could hear voices saying "Tara it's your mother, come!" I ran where i could hear the voices. It turned out to be a statue of my mother! I screamed! "Tara, Tara wake up!" A voice said. I opened my eyes and saw Lily. I was in the nurse's office and had an ice pack on my head. "You screamed while you were knocked out. What happened?" Lily said. I didn't aweswer because i saw a shadow. The shadow was the ghost who was haunting my dreams!

You could either put this in the next chapter or this chapter.