User blog comment:Flyingace4/Fanfics: Doctor who AU/@comment-12736261-20140524190321

I found so many grammar mistakes in this. I would copy this whole thing into a word document and fix the spelling and everthing there.


 * Make sure you capitalize all names, even the doctor.


 * Maybe isn't spelled "Mabye".


 * Make sure you always clarify who is speaking after a quote, sometimes you didn't say and it was confusing since there were so many of them there.


 * Do not do periods. after. every. word. in writing, it is grammatically incorrect. After you say who said it instead say: "What the blooming!" Donna said pausing between every word.


 * Do not change tenses. You kept on chaning from present tense to past tense. Example, "I like apples." John said. and "I like apples too." Tom says. Learn the difference between said and says.


 * Make sure you never omit quotation marks! They are a necessity!


 * If you don't know how to spell a word, look it up on google. Don't just try to spell it on your own.


 * Capitalize the letter i when you are using it when speaking of one self.


 * I would add more descriptions and stuff so it isn't just Speaking after speaking after speaking.


 * You should read this about 5 times to edit it and scrape off rough edges.


 * I suggest getting a grown-up, or an older sibling or something read this, and tell them to edit and revise, and give their input.

I was going to correct every single grammar mistake in this but the comment was getting lengthy, and I thought this was better. It is a nice draft, thought I would fix its mistakes before submitting it.