User blog comment:Flyingace4/Fanfics: Doctor who AU/@comment-24487434-20140524030048

Hmm...

Well, I'm not good with...grammar...we all know that...

BUT I did see something:

"All repaired! Lovely, shush. Nobody knows were here, got to keep quiet. Silent running, like on submarines when you cant ever drop a spanner. Don't drop a spanner!" (See? You put 'evev', probably a typo...)

Anyways, I like it!

All you need to do is capitalize on some words, but over all good ^w^